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hey Sylos30 how many days is the game gonna have just curious also i gave you five stars as a rating because the game is really good keep up the good work! also will all three characters have NSFW scenes? Thank you for making this game and for your time! I Love This VN CAN'T WAIT FOR IT TO BE FINISHED PLEASE FINISH IT ITS SO GOOD!

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Hiya! I have 15 days planned for the game for now, thank you for the 5 stars rating! All 3 chars will have NSFW scenes! :)

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Hey Sylos30 thanks for making this game from what i  played so far i really like this fan made sequel of the original game and those 3 characters are my favorite especially tatsuki i mean i love juuichi but i love tatsuki more so thank you for making this game its really good. Do you have a update schedule or do you update when you feel like the date is ready just wondering because i like to keep up with this game its really good so far keep up the good work!

Hi Andrew778 and thank you for your kind comment! I try to update the VN on a weekly basis. Of course since I am the only person working on the project there might be a a couple days delay between updates.

Hope this answers your question! :)

Is still being worked on?

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Hiya, yes it is!

it's me gunt

I know, I recognised the name :P

I'm worried about you> _ <

hello sylos

Why hello!

Why is the update installing a new app named My Application without my saves on android?

Hiya, it looks like a bug! I am looking into resolving this now!

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Shouldn't Tatsuki stop drinking if he wants to be a good mate to Hiroyuki? Being  a huge drunkard isn't an attractive trait, considering his father isn't exactly a role model to follow...

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Old habits die hard lol. I believe he will stop or at least tune it down along the playthrough (him being a drunk most of the times might be just for character development reasons).

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Shitty situation for poor Hiroyuki... 

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Thanks for your comment! As Manoferreir said it is done this way for character development reasons, you should have seen a change on day 4 already ;)

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I know damn well i'm going for torahiko no matter how many routes in this games

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Thank you for the kind comment, I am glad you are liking the game thus far!

Could you port the VN to windows 7 x86 32 bit? I can't play it...

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Hi! The game should be running fine on Win7, however I do not have a machine with it to test this.  Have tried any compatibility modes or run as admin? I will investigate further and see what I can do.

Before i play this, someone please tell me that Tora FINALLY gets a route

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Yip, Tora gets a route!

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BEEP BEEP BEEP!!!

UGH. How dare you!

I just spent my entire afternoon playing all of the routes. 

(you know who this is lol). 

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Haha! Lol!

My thoughts on Morenatsu2

First of all I want to say I'm impressed you single handedly started working on a sequel of Morenatsu. Your love for the game must be pretty big. You tried and didn't fail making it feel like the old one, aside a few things. The artstyle and music are of course the most noticeable aspects and reminiscent for many. I like that you included a world map too.

Now I know you said it yourself in the end, but yeah... the overflowing emotion density was high, very high this time around. 
Also what I noticed is how short every day was, even though you managed to provide the plot with character development surprisingly. 
In all honesty, to me it doesn't sit right how Hiroyuki, Torahiko and Juuichi act around each other, it is really awkward. (I don't know about Tatsuki) You pretty much nailed their characters, but the way they talk... I understand you wrote it so Hiro was once again away from Minasato (please get the name right haha), though only for a year. I don't dislike it, it's just... a little bit weird. However the language you used is fine. 

If I find more to say, I'll make sure to write it down too.

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Thank you for the kind comment and feedback! I am working very hard to improve the project as best as I can and your feedback really helps in doing so! Please let me know if there's anything else I can improve on!

Cheers!

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Thank you for being open to criticism. Not everyone even in this, usually friendly, community is.

I've been thinking about one thing and that is nsfw scenes for Tora. His route was never finished (maybe in Japanese Idk), so there's no art for him. To be honest, I don't think I've ever played the very original, let's say core game, only Morenatsu Revisited and Homecoming, though I'm not certain about it. What I'm getting at is I don't know, is there artwork made by you or are all of the pictures from the original? 

Oh also, Is Hiroyuki (the MC's name in the original game, Revisited and Homecoming I believe) a human or a furry/antropomorphic animal? I was hoping for a furry, but since you used the old art entirely he's going to be or already is a human, right?

Well, I'll think about it. For now I don't really have much to say, maybe after an update or two.

Good luck and Cheers! Thank you very much aswell~

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Hiya! Tora will have his own NSFW scenes, I have an artist working on it!

With regards to Hiro, he's human in my VN :)

Thanks again!

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That's awsome! 

Human? Boring. ;) But I can learn to live with it. ^^

Actually, both of us got Hiroyuki's nickname wrong, it's Yuki not Hiro. If you want you can include both. *shrug*

Take Care~

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Looks good! I have a question though. Will we see a full route for Ten Kodori? Poor guy deserves some love too.

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Thanks for your comment! I am focusing on those three chars for now but a route for Ten could be possible in the future. :)

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That's wonderful to know. I'm excited to see what you'll come up with and what this VN will be in the future! :)

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Dude, this is amazing! Can;t wait to see what happens next!

Thank you!

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This is pretty good so far but I really hope the CGs aren't just stolen from the internet, cuz I saw one of the CGs in a google search long ago

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Thank you for your comment! All CGs have either been commissioned (and paid) by myself or voluntarily provided by their owners. :)

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Oh okay, that's good. Keep up the good work then!

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Wow! you update consistently don'tcha? I love it! I'm so glad you are doing this hehe the nostalgia is real. I cried and had a silly smile throughout all the playthrough.  Keep up the hard work, we are loving it <3


Also a question: Everytime I update my game I lose the savedata. Is there a way to transfer from a older version? Or what should I do? (Sorry I'm used to the Ren'py engine which import saves automatically).

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Thank you for your kind comment/feedback!

Yes, transferring save files is quite easy (I am assuming you are on Windows): 

When downloading a new update just override files in your current game folder., alternatively you can move your save files from the old game folder to the new one, if you chose to do so there are only 2 files you need to move:


Hope this helps!

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Sure does, thanks a lot!

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My pleasure!

Geate!!! But I not heard sound cut scene or  effect not sure it is bug on my pc or it not yet update in XD.


Look forward to see your next update!!!

Thank you for your comment! There should be music in the game :)

This looks great so far, keep up the good work.

On a side note, while i know you may not do anymore routes outside of these three, I definitely feel like Ten Kodori would be a great addition, especially if you love Juiichi (Ten had a smaller route in the that was added to the first Morenatsu Revisited project). If you don't do any more routes then it would still be cool if you had an extra mode with small "what if" scenes for some of the other previous characters.

Either way I am loving this and as long as the Morenatsu team doesn't have a problem with it you should create a patreon for this project.

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Thank you for your comment! I will focus on those 3 for now, however other side routes are not off the table :).

I was thinking about setting up a Patreon eventually, however, I really want everyone to enjoy this game free of charge.

That said, I am spending hours writing the story down, scripting and implementing never seen before CGs .

I might get in touch with the original team though, will see how things go :)

You want more VN's? Look no further than my profile. ;) There's about 100 of them.

augh... I'm crying in the intro! my god. thank you for bringing me back to my juuichi!

Aw thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it so far :)

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Really enjoying this game! Keep up the good work!

Thank you!

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Good luck with your project, buddy:) Even though i love Juuichi and this fanmade sequel makes him as a main love interest, Torahiko x Hiroyuki is still OTP, a canon pairing from the original game and will always be) Btw, i'm happy you're using the original sprites, that's a right choice ^^

P.S. We don't know which city Hiroyuki moved to. In the original, it was just an unknown city, "Osaka" is an addition by revisited/homecoming team and isn't an original source. Anyway, good luck once again:3

Thank you for your comment and feedback! :)

You're welcome))

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Oh this sounds interesting! But will there only be  tora, juuichi and tatsuki? Im one of the Shin fanboys and i would really really love to see him back! I can imagine there could be a continuation after SPOILER AHEAD















 the Kiss at the end from the original game when Hiro left with the Bus! 

Maybe give a option in the beginning to choose which character you had your expiriences with in the original game and then go from there.

(I havent played your game yet)

Hiya! Thank you for your comment. This game revolves around those 3 and I have no current plans to include any others for now, sorry :)

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I can say that I am happy that it is using the original art.

I love that more.

Thank you for the comment :)

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thank  you

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Thank you for playing it! :)

aww heck yah!! thank you for making this... haha looking forward for more... ohh..

Thank you! I am glad you like it thus far!

yep! love it!

Just to help you out: Look at my profile for even more VN's ;)  There should be about 90 in total. If you want more outside of itch, you may ask. I know of a few more, 10 maybe.

uwu thanks!

do you know some vn that's not in itch?

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Indeed, I do. Have fun~

– Kemo Coliseum

– Lagoon Lounge 1-3

– Lovers of Aether

– Notes of Hearts

– Hidden World

– Bitter & Sticky

– Dream Savior Gakuen - ReDraw (not sure if it's available outside of Japan)

– Lunateria

– Maison De M

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Love you efforts in making this game! I am also very glad there are not as many date-able characters! Keep up the good work!!!

Thank you! :)

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Thank you! Really enjoying the game so far!

Thank you! :)

Amazing game! I liked how you did an incredible sequence

Thank you for the kind comment! :)

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This VN is so good that i had to register an account just to leave a 5 stars review and a comment. Thank you so much for your hard work!

Thank you!

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Good work on this novel! Love it so far.

Thank you for the kind comment!

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This guy just pushed 2 updates in the last 24 hours, and he's working on his own! I really appreciate your hard work! Thank you!

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Thank you! I am trying my best :)

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This is amazing! I can't believe your doing it on your own! LOVE LOVE LOVE this sequel!

Thank you!

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If I am reading right Hiro starts by having a romance with Juuichi and then it can go great or not (in which case you can date Tora or Tsanu). I love this!! I can't wait for future updates!!!

Thank you for your kind comment! I am working real hard to push out an update as soon as possible :)

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OMG! This is so great!!!! I can't believe you are doing all this on your own!!!

My favourite scene so far:


Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it! :)

This Morenatsu situation is just confusing. We had: the original game which was left unfinished, a revival port that tried to finish the game but I don’t know if it actually finished it, a remake of the first game which is still in progress and taking awhile, and now a fan made sequel to the first game.

This situation is just kinda funny. But good work on this so far, would love it if anyone could clear up the confusion for me though

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Thank you for your comment!

You are right, Morenatsu is indeed a confusing matter.  They have in fact finished a version of the game called Morenatsu -Revisited- (you can find it in furaffinity), I said finished but they never actually completed Tora's routes.

This game I am developing continues from the original Juuichi's perfect ending in which he falls in love with MC but they still part ways as MC needs to return to Osaka.

On top of that, this game will offer a complete romance-able route for Tora (should the player decide to do so).

I hope this clears things a bit!

are u sure its finished i think they are severel routes not completed. 
Or did i miss out on something i played both versions

Most of the routes were completed, except for Tora and a couple more chars.

My game starts from Juuichi's ending (which was completed). It addition to that, it gives player the option to romance Tora and Tatsuki.


Hope this helps!

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Had the raccoon route in the very 1st version. But it disappeared in the second 1st version and had a new route with the friend of the bear. The wolf/dog that fight with him. I didn't played its route.

Have a very short end with the tiger in the middle of the bear route. In a single day and without adult art.

Only the lion and the dog had not routes at all. But had new moments with both in the 2nd version of the 1st version... v.0.35 - v.0.5 I think.

I am not sure about the revisited version. I didn't play it yet,


Mewing,

Pandrine


P.S.: I had a dream with the bear while playing his route that long ago.

Oh, I didn't even know the original was never finished. This sequel didn't make sense to me given the Revisisted endings for Juuichi, and I had assumed those were the same as the original. But if the original was never finished, I don't know if that's actually the case. I guess this sequel is assuming there was a good ending for Juuichi.

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Both the original and the revisited have same Juuichi's good ending! They fall in love but then Hiro needs to go back to Osaka! This sequel makes perfect sense.

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Thanks for your comment! Juuichi's perfect ending for both original and revisited is the following: at the end of the summer, Juuichi gave his jacket to Hiroyuki, both as a way to remember him and as a contract that Hiroyuki will come back and return it to him.

Hope this clears things up! :)

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Wait... so... I... somehow *never saw* the good ending? How many endings are there? I thought there were only 2, and neither of them were good.

Maybe I need to try playing Revisited again and figure out what I missed.

Opened it back up and noticed that there are actually guides. It looks like I missed something veeeery early on.

Ok, got the good ending on another playthrough, and I get it now.

Hi there!

I am glad things got cleared up! Please let me know if you have any issues with the game. :)

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The bear had two ends but the some changes. The best had two adult scenes and the worse... I don't like to remember it. It is so sinister.

The dragon route had 6 ends... some comicaly crazy.

Most routes had two ends. But the cat had a best end with ... something only its route show at the end before you get in the bus back home and some after if you find something out in the cat's room.


But well. I mean about the very 1st version I played few years ago.

no. morenatsu was never finished. many revival teams tried their hand. NONE have succeeded thus far. Torahiko was forced to receive his happy ending in a seperate linear VN.

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True, but Juuichi's route was completed, that is where this game starts. Also, he's a one man team, he needs our support!

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Came all the way from Reddit! This game kicks ass! Kudos to the developer.

Thank you! Much appreciated!

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This game is amazing! Can't wait for more updates!

Thank you for the feedback!

Great game.

Thank you for your kind comment! :)

any chance there will be a mobile verion if thats ok ill still give this a shot. I just can't play NSFW in my living room with other other family member around XD

Hi there, I am working on porting this to mobiles, however I don't know how soon it will be available, sorry for any inconvenience this might cause you! 

Keep an eye out for further updates :)

no thank you that's more then what some VNs do. I'm excited to play I always wanted to continue my story with Tatsunii. 

Thank you for understanding! Please feel free to rate the game once you've played it :)

oh I just read that your forced to be with Juuichi i'm less interested now. I want my Tatsunii :(

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The story starts by featuring MC together with Juuichi. However, you can follow Tatsu route, fall in love with him and get together. Only note that this means a break-up with Juuichi. :)

That's kind of sad I feel bad for haveing to do that just to get the guy I liked in the first game. It also means none of the events we had together happened. It's not quite the same :/

While I completely understand your point of you, I think this adds to the game-play. I also believe some sadness does make a story more interesting and personable in a way :)

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I think dev idea makes sense, it adds interesting paths to the game, I know it's sad but such is life! I do personally love the idea behind it!

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